C & C Pwease!

[MGriff240]

C & C is welcome/encouraged. :thumbup:

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(Had some trouble with that one...The sunlight was BRIGHT and I couldn't get her exposed nearly as well as I wanted to.)

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

#3 is a little bit of lovely. I like the backlighting. Nice composition.
The farther leg being so much brighter is taking a little away though.

the girls pose in #2 looks awkward or odd.

 

[MGriff240]

I was thinking about darkening her leg a bit, I'm glad I'm not the only one who noticed it.

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

It makes the front leg stand out that much more, and then you have that "light advances and dark receeds" thing creating bad visual tension.

Try darkening the back leg a bit, and lighten the front leg. Kinda split the difference, I guess.

 

[dak1b]

#1 is cool. maybe a little more focused.

the others aren't appealing to me.