C & C Pwease!

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  1. MGriff240

    MGriff240 TPF Noob!

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    C & C is welcome/encouraged. :thumbup:

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    (Had some trouble with that one...The sunlight was BRIGHT and I couldn't get her exposed nearly as well as I wanted to.)
     
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    #3 is a little bit of lovely. I like the backlighting. Nice composition.
    The farther leg being so much brighter is taking a little away though.

    the girls pose in #2 looks awkward or odd.
     
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    I was thinking about darkening her leg a bit, I'm glad I'm not the only one who noticed it.
     
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    It makes the front leg stand out that much more, and then you have that "light advances and dark receeds" thing creating bad visual tension.

    Try darkening the back leg a bit, and lighten the front leg. Kinda split the difference, I guess.
     
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    #1 is cool. maybe a little more focused.

    the others aren't appealing to me.
     

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