C&C some new stuff

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  1. Kofman13

    Kofman13 TPF Noob!

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    This is some new stuff ive done, comments please!

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    And this is my girlfriend :)
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    Inst!nct TPF Noob!

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    I like the colors in number 1 i guess, not a GREAT picture, not bad either though, number 2 is good, the colors are good but it lacks a real subject point which is kind of sort of crucial to a photo. I mean, its a nice sky, but not many pictures of just a sky and some tree line will prove to be a GOOD photo. Number 3, i hate-love the body part cuts off (head), and its WAYYY overexposed, turn that down and gaussian blur if you want smoother skin..
    :) nice pics though, just nit picking ;)

    also signature is a bit big in first picture, may i ask why you choose to sig your stuff?
     
  3. Kofman13

    Kofman13 TPF Noob!

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    I posted those to facebook and didn't want random people thieving them
     
  4. TJ K

    TJ K No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Honestly it wouldn't take much work to remove the mark if they wanted to. Like in the second one just a small crop in the bottom and it's gone. Colors are nice in 2 but what ever that is near the bottom right plane or something is a bit distracting.
    TJ
     
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    Inst!nct TPF Noob!

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    most people just do it cause it looks bad ass
     
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    I like the first photo. :thumbup: on the processing.
     
  7. Bitter Jeweler

    Bitter Jeweler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I really like the first one. It may be a bit blwn, but I like the overall treatment here. I really dig the expression. I find the vignetting acceptable on this one.

    Nice image.
     
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    Fist picture is good! And overall you are improving your pictures quality. Keep it up!
    Regards,
    b.
     
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    Thanks guys. I'm learning more and more :)
     
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    Kofman13 TPF Noob!

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    ur right gaussian blur is great :)
     
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    i think number 3 has great potential but has a major flaw to me...
    it looks like focus was totally missed.
    i like the pose, the composition, the high-key technique...but i wish those eyes were in focus...they would totally pop and add a great spot to draw the viewers eye.
    close up that ap, and get the eyes and lips in focus. i think it would be killer! :D
     
  12. pugnacious33

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    I agree with what everyone says about the two portraits. Really good but with some minor flaws.

    The sunset has good color but the composition just isn't there.
     

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