C&C this portrait for me please!

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  1. cestlefun17

    cestlefun17 TPF Noob!

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    Camera: Canon Rebel T2 35mm
    Lens: 28-90mm f/5.6
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    Film: Krueger 400 color negative


    A portrait of my sister. Is the sun too harsh? Composition OK? Thanks. One of my first photos.

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    well...she's pink for one
     
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    The WB seems off. That red tint isnt right.
     
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    How do you adjust the white balance?
     
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    Any image editing software should have an Auto and manual white balance (should be under colorer)
     
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    Still a bit to red but better

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    Sorry for double post:meh:
     
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    looks over exposed to me.and there is a lot of blow out.
     
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    hah that's a lot better...

    i think the light is a little rough?...
     
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    the OP, looks like something you'd see in a 70's early 80's magazine, thats what I got from a quick look, Ophers edit brings the coloring closer to where it should be, but it is a lil'overexposed too, I would have probably framed the whole modle aswell as not to much of her is actualy cut out.
     
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    New edit (desaturated the green to try to give it more depth)

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    Personally speaking... as a redhead, I'm that pink all summer naturally lol :D
     
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    Thanks! Those edits look great, especially the second one.
     

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