California C&C Please

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    20civic04 TPF Noob!

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    went to cali for a couple days for my brothers wedding a got a chance to do a little exploring while i was there.
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    anyone?
     
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    I think they are great pictures. The one with the rocks stacked is really neat but the wave in the background, while usually great, is dragging my eye away from the stacked rocks.
     
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    Nice shots. What part of California did you visit?
     
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    You captured Cali very well. The palms have cali all over it!
     
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    You should number your pictures :p :lol:

    I'm loving these.. I dont see a whole lot of anything wrong with most of them ( to my untrained eye of course) But there are just a *few* nitpicks ...

    1-3, are really good! :thumbup: Lighting, composition, everything seems right.
    4.only thing i noticed, was the 'jet stream' coming out of the tree...I personally would clone that out.
    5.Loving the stacked rocks. Did you find them like that or stack them yourself?
    6. Really over exposed/ blow out , IMO.
     
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    Number 1 is fantastic!
    i could see that in my living rooom. you have good eye of perspection.
     
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    was only there for a couple days but i got a chance to visit malibu beach, santa barbara and we stayed in thousand oaks. lol thanks for reminding me about numbering the pics i always forget to do that. thanks for all the comments and yea the i found the rocks stacked like that.
     

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