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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Chadfehr, Jul 29, 2009.

  1. Chadfehr

    Chadfehr TPF Noob!

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    Let me know what you guys think. Thanks alot:)


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  3. Chadfehr

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    Yeah I posted this twice because I just wanted to get some thoughts from people, and no one said anything on other post.
     
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    well you could just "bump"

    But I have been looking these over and if you really want good C&C only post at most 3 of your best. And really nothing stands out but Ill try ccing the technical part. And this in all IMO.

    #1 good use of the rule of thirds but could've used a wider crop.
    #2 too much dutch tilt, and whats the subject? I think it might be the flowers but they aren't really in focus. the wood is though.
    #3 again the tilt(personally i don't like tilt) but the flowers seem to be in focus.
    #4 clipping of the antenna and thats bugging me!;)
    #5 too saturated and the bug is hard to see in the shadow.
     
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    great focusing, but u need to crop the edge off #3. Odd perspective, makes me nauseous...
     
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    2 & 3 make me feel a little dizzy. At least you are trying to get an interesting perspective of things - but don't over do it.
     

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