Can anything else be done???

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  1. PNA

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    Any suggestion to make the shot stand out? No one responded in the General Gallery so I'm asking for some input here.......:)
     
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    The central composition of the subject doesn't help I don't think, I'd perhaps take a larger portion of the wall and have the mask thing on the bottom right...?
     
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    Thanks....good point.

    BTW it's a mail slot in Venice, Italy.
     
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    I tend to feel that I would much rather not have that door frame in the photo along with the letter box - a rare and interesting letter box, I might add, not one you'd see everyday! :D - somehow it seems to compete with the opening in the wall that is that box's mouth...

    I do like the straightening, upping of contrasts and generally more texure of the wall!
     
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    I merely cropped additionally on the right side......

    Any better????


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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    You mean "left" when you say "right"?
     
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    I saw your photo in the general gallery, and I kind of liked it, but it didn't grab me in any way...so I didn't respond. It's a pretty interesting subject, but it didn't stir me enough to make a comment on it. It might not have anything to do with your technique.
     
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    Sorry about that.....

    Right, left, up, down....at my age it's all the same!:lmao: As long as I can "move".
     

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