Cara (one bikini shot included)

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I have been working on my off camera flash skills. Here is Cara for some harsh C&C. Please give your honest opinions - I can take it and it helps me learn.

Thanks
Kristal

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[Big Mike]

Well done. I normally like bikini shots the most, but in this case, I think the first two are the best.

 

[Josh220]

Well done. I normally like bikini shots the most, but in this case, I think the first two are the best.

X2

I'm not diggin' the pose, facial expression, or the sand all over the top of her hand.

#1 is my favorite.

 

[dukeboy1977]

Well done. I normally like bikini shots the most, but in this case, I think the first two are the best.

X2

I'm not diggin' the pose, facial expression, or the sand all over the top of her hand.

#1 is my favorite.

I have to agree...what's with her expression? The sand isn't as big of a deal but the expression should be better IMO

 

[Sebastian Riel Ph.]

#1 is my favorite even though light is a bit harsh. #2 I would have asked her to let her hair down in front to cover that big forehead.

 

[Sbuxo]

i agree w/ Sebastian,
#1 is blown to the left, as well as on her arms and face.
#2: I'm looking more at the awesome sky than her. Her eyebrows bother me and her facial expression is whatever.
#3: Lol, look at her left wrist & down, the angle makes it look like it's a stubby little doll hand thing. She looks pretty red, too.

I don't have a favorite from the set.

 

[buddah2099]

I agree that #1 is a little blown out on the left side but I acctually think I like it better in this pic than if it had even lighting across the pic.
#2 the sky is awesome. I didn't even notice the girl at first.
#3 ...well....she's a hot girl in a bikini. Thats hard to mess up.

 

[Big]

Is there really a bad bikini shot?

 

[thirdkid]

Great lighting on the 2nd shot..

 

[Aye-non Oh-non Imus]

The bikini shot is flawed IMO. The legs seems severly amputated, the refraction on the left hand looks very odd and unfortunately, she suffers from the same disease as I do. A severe case of the gone-ass.

The other two are nicely done. If I had to nit.... the main light could have been feathered more on #2 so as not to be so extreme on the top of her head and left arm. But the background exposure is spot on. :thumbsup:

 

[Sbuxo]

Is there really a bad bikini shot?

google will break your heart

 

[Newnan3]

Well done. I normally like bikini shots the most, but in this case, I think the first two are the best.

I always like bikini shots the most!

 

[AndreaB]

#2 is the stand out to me, althought he sky is more interesting then the lady, and her shoes are distracting and do not fit in at all.

 

[mwcfarms]

Her shoes dont fit her in the 2nd shot at all. I mean her toes are all hanging over the edge. I like the lines and lighting in two but her expression ruins it for me. Bland. Her expression in one at last shows a bit of emotion although the lighting in two is better. Number three does nothing for me because of her facial expression. Plus she has tan lines showing and she's red.

 

[bolanegra]

Good work. the first the best.