Cards Anyone?

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by ths-acid, Jan 10, 2009.

  1. ths-acid

    ths-acid TPF Noob!

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    Well it is cold in Wausau at the moment. So I took some cards to my room, shut off the lights and used a flashlight for this picture.:p:lol: Overall I like it, but I want to here what you guys have to say. :thumbup:

    What can make this better?
    What does this picture lack?
    What stands out?

    Black & White
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    Color
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  2. ths-acid

    ths-acid TPF Noob!

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    Bump please, I would like some C&C.
     
  3. chrisburke

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    its out of focus...
     
  4. Samanax

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    Try correcting the white balance. Maybe a little deeper DOF.

    Did you use a tripod? Looks like a little camera shake going on. Maybe moving the "LOVE" up a little would help, seems too low in the frame.
    Tack sharp focus. And something about the composition...doesn't feel right.
    The cards are upside down.
     
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    What the he!! is a 0 of hearts??? - TF
     
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    Samanax TPF Noob!

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    It's the 10 of Hearts. Looks like he used white out tape to cover the "1".
     
  7. hankejp

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    Wausau, as in Wausau Wisconisn? if so, how cool is that. I am from Wausau and live in Weston now. What a small world. I like the picture but it looks a little soft or blurry.

    Welcome to the board and hope to have some converstations down the road.
     
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    'shopped maybe?
     

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