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  1. anubis404

    anubis404 TPF Noob!

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    These photos were taken at a Catholic Church that I live near. C&C appreciated.


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  2. anubis404

    anubis404 TPF Noob!

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  3. Jeff Canes

    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    IMO #2 is the best

    They all seem a bit saturated, is that style you are trying for?

    #1 poor main subject mostly because of the fountain pipes

    #s 3 & 4 the focus point seem off check your camera manual for focus lock and points

    Keep Practicing
     
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    anubis404 TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the feedback, and yes I was going for the saturated look.
     
  5. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I'll agree with Jeff's comments and add the following:

    2. In addition to being overly-saturated, there are excessive highlights on the sigh, and the large blown spot at the top, to the right is very distracting. I would suggest cropping closer to the main subject.
    3. The down-hill look of the vases/bottles/candle-covers is somewhat disconcerting. Try and keep your camera level, and in this case, square to the subject as well.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.
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    anubis404 TPF Noob!

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    I fixed the saturation issue:

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    However, I cannot get rid of the bright area, and cropping it out makes the pic look very boring.
     

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