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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by alabama1980, Mar 13, 2008.

  1. alabama1980

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    it isnt much, but for some reason i really liked it...but i need to know whats not quite right, or what i could do better...


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    I'm no professional but i think since there is no main subject in the middle of this picture that it would look better all clear and crisp. I also think it would looks better with a bigger depth of field to include the tracks in the picture.
     
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    To me, nothing seems to be in focus in this picture. The plant on the right was probably sharp but it looks like you made it blurry during post-processing. When I look at the picture, I have the feeling there is something wrong with my eyes because they cannot focus on anyhting; that is very disturbing.
     
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    I like the subject matter, however I'm not so keen on the blur vignette effect that you have used, particularly on the right hand side of the image. I think it is too exagerated and detracts from the image.

    Other wise it's a good composition.
     
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    i'm with scurra, i think the blur detracts
     
  6. alabama1980

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    Well here is the original...looked kinda "bleh" to me..think i tried to hard to "unbleh" it...lol.

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    I like the un-blured version a lot better! If the tracks, which im assuming where the main subject, where in focus it would have been better. But I still like it!
     
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    boost the blue color of the sky?
     
  9. alabama1980

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    Thank yall so much...:)

    And Sarah, I actually wanted more bokeh on the tracks...but I see your point. I may go reshoot it with the suggestions in mind....and by the way, you and I have almost the exact same setup....only thing I have different is the Sigma wide angle....which was sUPPOSED to be the 75-300 zoom....Dell sent me the wrong lens....so i got that and bought the 75-300 anyhow....:) hope you like your rebel as much as i like mine!
     
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    I like the original much better.
     
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    Good pic. Maybe close the ap. down a little more next time.
     
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    I like the orignial better, but if you keep the blurry vignette less abrupt and add some sort of grainy texture to it, it could be stronger. I like the square, it's as if it was shot with a hasselblad.
     

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