Character Shoot

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  1. gazettalux

    gazettalux TPF Noob!

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    Here's a single shot from a series...tell me what you think, but please look at it in context of the rest of the series at http://gazettalux.com/public/
    (it's under the shoot 'The Actor')

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    Technically, it's not very sharp and the contrast seems soft. I like the composition. The black-face make-up automatically puts me in an uncharitable frame of mind, but with the "no addmittance" sign it might be making a statement. Since the subject is actually white and the sign includes all, I'm not sure exactly what it would be. It does make me stop to think about it. I don't know if that was intentional.
     
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    Just an idea. Let me know what you think.

    I upped the contast and sharpened it a bit. I cropped to to be landscape rather than portrait and left out some of the busy parts. The fuzzy shadowy stuff at the top was kinda bugging me.

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