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  1. chrisu002

    chrisu002 TPF Noob!

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    I think this one would have looked better as a head on dead straight shot, then it would have really accentuated the squares and oblongs in the brickwork, doors and windows.

    And if you're going to do that, make sure you don't use a wide angle, that way you can keep everything straight - it has potential, but just the wrong angle IMO.
     
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    i agree perfectly with what tempra said...the angle is wrong. but the subject is very nice
     
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    nice contrasting colours
     

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