Cherries

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  1. DramaDork626

    DramaDork626 TPF Noob!

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    Olympus Digital, model x100. Lighting from a desk lamp, no flash

    Two jars of cherries...nothing to do...YAY PICTURE TIME
    Hows the lighting on this? How else can it improve. Is the statement bold enough?
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    Artemis Just Punked Himself

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    Oh I like this...border is a bit harsh...could it be a quiter red?
     
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    first off, lose the border. this image is nice and simplistic, I like the composition (and the lighting :)). I'm not sure if the 'statement is bold enough' as I am not really sure what 'statement' you are making, but this makes a nice attempt at commercial photography. This is nitpicking, but a little bit more of the fingers would be nice. There's also a couple light spots in the shadows that could be fixed quite easily in PS.
     

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