child and birds C&C please

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  1. Cosette

    Cosette TPF Noob!

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    Child in thought. I do have permission to post.
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    Puffin in AK
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    Pelican in Key West
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    C&C please, composition, exposure, etc.
     
  2. adversus

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    #1 is my favorite. I'm not generally a fan of really tight closeups, but the complexion on her face has a good character to it.

    #2 looks like a point and shoot snapshot. Doesn't do much for me.

    #3 would look better, but it's too bright (over exposed a bit) for my tastes, and the slanted horizon distracts away from the bird.
     
  3. Gaerek

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    I like the first and third one. I love puffins, but I think you missed focus there. Where in Alaska are you from? I'm guessing near the coast somewhere. SE Alaska perhaps? I live in Sitka right now. Not too many of us Alaskans on this forum.
     
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    The first one is too underexposed for my taste. I know you are trying to create a mood, but there is just too much detail lost in the shadows.
     
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    I agree about #1 being underexposed, although I really like the thought behind this pic.
     
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    That's great, some more folks in Alaska!

    I do like the third one the best.
     

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