children portrait

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  1. schumionbike

    schumionbike TPF Noob!

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    I was messing around with my cousin and I took her pictures while she was playing around. I like some critics as I like to get better. I'm not particularly happy with the composition in the first one, any tip?

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    Not sure about the composition on the first one (kinda looks like it was that, or nothing - grab shot, if you know what I mean), but I love the lighting. Bordering on under-exposed, but not quite. (What is that she's playing with?)
     
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    yeah, my little cousin was messing around with her bubble gum. I thought I underexpose the first shot too but it look fine in the RAW file, the camera jpeg just look off.

    For the second shot, I was trying out shooting at a wide angle, 18 mm on the kit lens. I try to incorporate her environment in the composition, so I put her under the table where alot of kids spend their time hiding from each other lol.
     

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