Chrysalis Birth

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  1. Luminosity

    Luminosity No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Chrysalis Birth

    Stripping away my skins..peeling..
    stripping
    I rip..in a daze
    Sleepy
    but awakened..
    Blood trails dying , amongst dirt
    Infection eating..
    PAIN
    I am not the *me* you want
    now
    I just *am*
    and i'm kissing my shadow..that dark being
    that was always a touch away..
    WAS
    Now I am soaking with it.
    Old habits are dripping off , like sweat..
    and you are part of that river
     
  2. MDowdey

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    very nice lumi!!!! well done!



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  3. Luminosity

    Luminosity No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Thank you Matt.

    Now I need to write a song about daisies or something and post it ,
    to counteract the darkness in ^ that ^ one :lol: ;)
     
  4. MDowdey

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    dark is always better anyways...




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  5. manda

    manda instigator of pottymouthedness

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    Darkness is actually easier to write about I think.
    I find writing about happy things quite the challenge...

    kissing my shadow....love it
     
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    I tend to write about dark moments (and everything related to it) because its a time when I'm still and silent..
    Most people can relate to that , I know.
    Words are stitches for the invisible wounds and the page is my bandage , soaking up spilt blood... ;)
    I guess when we're happy , we're too busy soaking it up to stop and reflect on it all ...
    because we know its fleetin .. so we're grabbing it with both hands...
     
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    manda instigator of pottymouthedness

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    That's such a good reasoning behind it!
    I love that.
     

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