city (almost) by the seaside

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  1. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    and here's another picture for the contest... serious critique reaaaalllly welcomed
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    meotter TPF Noob!

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    interesting action shot :)

    however, the diagnol line going across the top is a bit distracting and the background is quite dark to the point that i can't really tell what it is... perhaps a slightly tighter crop to remove that line?

    otherwise, i like how crisp the water is and the washout of the wake.
     

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