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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Goldenblaze, Jul 15, 2006.

  1. Goldenblaze

    Goldenblaze TPF Noob!

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    how did they come out? Do you think that light kind of takes your eye off the picture?
    Critisize me if possible!
     
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    i really like the first one. the sky looks beautiful :)
     
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    thanks i liked that one too!
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    The second one is suffering from too little light.
    It shows camera shake, is extremely noisy, and there is way too much black space at the bottom.

    Criticism gone, let's look at the first:
    Your take at architecture is good here, nothing distracting in the pic, not even a cloud, a clear, blue background against which the shape of that tall building and the other buildings show quite clearly.
    The architecture photography purists might moan about the lens distortion, but I don't ;).
     
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    Ok well it looks like I'm learning because I also thought your first shot was fantastic and thought the second one was a little lacking in light and too much darkness at the bottom of the photo.

    Try cropping a good bit of the blackness out of the photo and it would really improve it :D
     
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    Yay for picture 1!
    Picture 2, it wasn't an intentional picture at all i was like running through the field (in back of my house haha) and i just took a picture while running, thats why the camera shake, but i get what you are talking about :)
     

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