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  1. sabenemmons

    sabenemmons TPF Noob!

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    here is a new one from me.... im not sure if i like it's style and was just looking for some input.



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    any thoughts at all.
     
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    i think it looks pretty good
     
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    Yep, I like it. Perhaps a touch more red and more contrast? Like the silhouetting though, good composition.
     
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    i like how the highway curves around one way and the power lines curl off the other direction.

    it's not overly dramatic with color, but it's simple enough to work.

    i'm thinking a slightly tighter crop will help clean up the pic some... there is an awful lot of dead space with just pale blue sky in it.
     

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