Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by vonnagy, Aug 28, 2004.
Its a rather cliche looking shot, but aside from that - I like to get your thoughts
Seems a little dark to me. Other than that, it's nice. Might be kinda neat to see it with a slightly tighter crop? I dunno though.
I'd cut the left edge and bottom on a crop. Having said that, it's much less cliche for having multiple daisies and not just one. With a crop, I reckon it's a great shot.
It's nicely done. I wouldn't call it cliched as much as just an exercise in "fill the frame" technique. I like how you've brightened the single flower to break the pattern slightly. It's actually very nice.
Now, get back to the B&W! :twisted: (You know I'm gonna keep nudging you, right?)
vonnagy! It would be a great wallpaper if there were more light
thanks for your eyes & comments - dodged the daisy that was sharp and used a burn mask for the rest - realise with the DOF it probably didn't need the mask so I removed it and did ye ol' square crop on this (I dig square crops )
Wow! Great re-work on this picture. I really like square crops as well.
I prefer the closer crop also plus it's not so dark
That square one is so much different from the original. It just seems so much more intense, and I like it!
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