Clock/Girl themed photoshoot: Give me some feedback

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Tmill, Sep 22, 2008.

  1. Tmill

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    The idea of youth and time came to me. How when we are young, and happy, we wish time would stop. I would like some serious critique's. I accidentally posted this in the wrong place on here so I figured I'd repost it in the proper section. Don't be afraid to be mean, I know they have flaws. Also some of them I edited with a cool effect and other with a more warm effect. I was just messing around to see what I liked. I realize that if I was posting these as a serious series of pictures somewhere they should be consistent with their post processing effects whether I'd be the cool or warm.

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    They are good shots. #3 and #10 are the best to me. I'm not fond of the ones on the road. The fist one looks like she was photoshoped in to me it just doesn't work for me. The rest of the road shots are much better though.

    Oh yeah, beautiful model!
     
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    I think you did great job on these. I am just not sure about the clock though.
     
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    I agree. Great photos, I just can't tell what you are trying to do with the clock. Silihari is a beautiful model, just get her out and take some great pics.

    BTW, ditch the flip-flops and get some nice pumps or heels. Pointed feet make the legs appear longer and sexier (not that it's needed, but.....)

    If you want to stick with the clock theme, try setting the clock to different times of the day, and have different outfits & settings to fit the set time.
     
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    How is it 3:27 in every picture?? almost like you froze time.
     
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    For easier reference and critique please number your shots.. I like 8 the best.
     
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    Interesting idea for a project. Overall a nice set, especially like the shots where you have the dress complimented by the grass.
     
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    these are real nice man
     
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    Me...? Hey, I'm all for "art"!! However, the clock thing does nothing for me.

    The model is beautiful...and as someone else said, get rid of the flip flops. Bare feet or high heels is what I'd go with!

    I think you've got something there with the model on the road, though....I'm not sure what!! (But, I don't like the yellow line in front of her.) LOL!! Not only did I kind of like them, they make you go "Oh!!! Pretty girl! Get off the road before a car comes!" (Weren't there any cars on that road?)

    LOL!!

    Love how your photos really pop! Nice work! :O)

    Can't wait to see more from you!!!!

    Edited to add...Ummm, I think that when you are younger, either time means nothing to you, or you wish it would go faster. It's when you are ...eh hem, "old-er" that you wish time would slow down a bit!! ;O)
     
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  10. Paul M

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    ummmmm Take the batteries out of the clock? :confused:
     
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    Cool idea, as young as I am I can understand the point without even reading it, lol.

    Composition is great as well as the colors and focus. But I have to agree on the flip flop thing.
     
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    I think these are excellent. Great concept and very well shot. Nicely done.
     

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