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  1. Menace

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    I took this one morning while i was on my way home from work. I noticed the color in the sky looked amazing. I pulled my car over on the side of the road and snapped a few. This one is my fav. Let me know what you guys think. It was taken with my sony 3.2 digi.


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    The sky is very nice, but there is a lot of forground that's black and could be cropped a bit to force more attention to the sky. If you crop off about an inch or so from the bottom, I think that would help this shot a lot :)
     
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    Beautiful. I agree with Amanda though. I think this is the first shot I've ever liked with the power lines IN it. Leads the eye. Very pretty.
     
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    i like it alot, i agree with the croppping idea though. Powerlines add to it.
    Very nice work.
     
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    I was thinking the same thing about all the black. Heres a revised version.

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    Much better IMO :) Really lovely shot now...it forces your eye to the towers fading in the distance, and the wires help to lead the eye there :) Great work :)
     
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    Maybe a slight crop on the bottom of the photo? Seems like it is just dead space offering nothing to the photo, might add additionaly help in leading the eyes a bit more.
     

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