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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by anarkisti, Oct 7, 2007.

  1. anarkisti

    anarkisti TPF Noob!

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    Hi!

    I'm new to this forum and this is my first photo I send here. I'm from Finland and I shoot film, just for the fun of it.

    I'd like to have c&c. I shot this photo with Nikon FM, 50mm 1:1.8 lens and scanned the slide (Fuji Sensia ISO400). The slide was unfortunately quite dusty, as you can see. The photo is unedited - as is.
     
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    I think some more DOF wouldn't hurt. The hand in the foreground should express a bit more emotion; it just looks kind of unnatural to me. I realize the person was leaning on his right hand, but the half-arm by itself is quite distracting. Otherwise, it's a great subject and a nice photo.
     

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