Coin Laundry, Film Version

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  1. cosmonaut

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    I like it. Good exposure. The two old van seats in front add a nice touch. ron
     
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    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    The only thing missing is a single patron.
     
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    very simlpe, i like it
     
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    Since kundalini brought it up, I was thinking the same thing, someone doing something, or clothes spinning in one of the dryers, or just sitting on one of the van seats, would have been a plus. Of course you may have waited until the place was empty. Subjective, but it could have said more. ron
     
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    I agree, Cosmo, it needs one person inside toiling, like the way I toil in the laundromat from time to time. One other suggestion: the newer Coke machine is too bright. Sneak up there and unplug it next time. It seems a bit distracting. That or maybe it's ironic that a machine is the brightest thing in the frame. I dunno.
     
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    I like the symmetry and linearity, adds to the loneliness.

    Quaint, but in a good way. I like it a lot.
     
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    I really like this shot. You should post the one of night time, sometime.
     

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