College Siblings C&C Please

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  1. kric2schaam626

    kric2schaam626 TPF Noob!

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    Hi all, I did these pics for some very good friends of mine in March. Just came across them on my external, thought I'd share for any C&C. Let me know what you think, thanks!

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    1, 2. I can't say these do much for me, they appear rather 'snap-shottish' and not overly interesting.

    3, 4. These both have a lot of potential, and show much more creativity and interest. They also both share some common issues, specifically the blowing hair obscuring their faces and over-bright highlights. I think ideally some fill light to reduce the dynamic range would have helped.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

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    I like 2 and 3, but Dudes hair in face is annoying. The stuff in upper right of #1 is distracting.
     
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    4 is my favorite by far but 2-4 look a little over exposed to me.
     
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    looks like all of these are a little over exposed
     
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    Yeah . . . he has a thing about his hair . . . he is a little snotty. Not much I could do.

    Thanks everyone else. Since then I have been keeping better tabs on my exposure levels.
     
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    I'd bet he loves the last one then, lol. Ah, if he likes it then I suppose that's what they wanted!
     

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