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  1. kRiZ cPEc

    kRiZ cPEc TPF Noob!

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    I took the following picture and converted it to b&w later. I wanted the photo to visualise an earthly heaven.
    DO you think I have succeed in what I intended to capture?[​IMG]
    Comments and suggestions are very important.
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    It DOES have a dreamy quality to it.
    Things that will help in the future:
    An image can be razor sharp, then softened with a better result.
    You have a sunflare in the lower right. I'm not sure if that was intended, but it would look nice in color.
    I like your dof and fog here and would be curious to see it in color.
     
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    thank you for the comment. It was overcast that day so I went straight to b & w.
     
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    The foliage does look out of focus. Also, cropping about 1/8 at the bottom and 1/8 of the top could help. I do like how the "fog" disappears into "white".
     
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    thanks for your suggestions.:)
     
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    Have you ever found yourself daydreaming about life or trying to just find relief from stress in life? This picture captures what I would visualize in my head. Great photo!
     
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