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  1. vonnagy

    vonnagy have kiwi, will travel...

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    Here's another photograph i am not sure about. Its's slightly under exposed hence the deepness of the blue sky at the top. Not a 'striking' photo, but its growing on me. comments and thoughts for improvements appreciated :)

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    I like it alot. THose sticks (I think they are sticks) remind me of some sort of factory or something (especially with the clouds comming off of the one in the right.
     
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    The first thing that came to mind when I saw this is the album cover for Pink Floyd's "Animals." It's a compliment.
     
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    Those clouds are striking. Even though it is a tad underexposed, I think it fits well.
     
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    Scott WRG Editor King of Smoothness

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    I like it, like ZacKrohn, those sticks bring to mind a factory and it sort of plays with your head regarding perspective and scale. Cool stuff.
     
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    gorgeous. I love the colors. What film did you use?
     
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    hehe thats funny I was gonna say the exact same thing...but I wasnt sure if von woud know waht I was talking about :lol:
     
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    photong Typo Queen

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    Neat. I can't tell if it's too busy or fine the way it is.

    what film did you use? is the colour photoshopped?

    i like the deep blue sky. it helps with the nice colours.
     
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    Karalee hOtLiPs!

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    Kinda looks like your looking into one of those diarama things but the clouds dont have any strings attached to them. That sky is crazy!
     
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    jadin The Mad Hatter

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    That's it. I give up. I'm moving to New Zealand. Have an extra room vonnagy?
     
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    Hey vonnagy, very nice colors as always.

    I have to agree with you , this one does grow on you over time. have you tried cropping out much of the sky above the clouds.

    There is definitely something in this picture, just not real sure how to make it pop out and scream... "here I am"...
     

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