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Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by Dave_D, Jul 23, 2005.

  1. Dave_D

    Dave_D TPF Noob!

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    Wow! My first critique request. Here ya go:
    This image was captured on Ilford xp2 400 super. The hues were random from image to image on the entire roll. It was my first time using this film so, I wasn't sure what to expect. The different hues were actually an interesting surprise. The equipment used is a Nikon F4s with a Nikon zoom-Nikkor 35~70mm 1:3.5 set at f/8-125s.
    This image is unmanipulated and displayed here the way it was when the shutter snapped.
    -What do you think of the angle?
    -How is the tonal range?
    -Besides my questions, what else would you ask and what are your thoughts, opinions, advice, etc. --- ote
    Thanks
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  2. Dave_D

    Dave_D TPF Noob!

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    OOOOOOOOOkay...so much for this "hotlink" stuff
     
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    I don't think the website you are using allows for image to be linked.
    I really like the lighting and the angle, however I think you want to the focus to be on the tracks and the things on the far left and right as slightly distracting and should be cropped out. Here would be my crop and I adjusted the levels a little bit to make the darks a little darker
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