Composition Issues!!

[Jessmica]

I want to use this photo in my project for college, but I dislike the composition.. to me it just doesn't look right

Does anyone have any ideas? Any other points of improvement would also be appriciated :mrgreen:

 

[bigtwinky]

What is the project you want to use it for?

Issues I see with the composition:
1- Its dead centre of the frame. Read up on the rule of thirds
2- There is alot of empty space over its head. Ensure that you fill the frame with your subject
3- I don't like the angle its shot at. You are too low.
4- If possible, try and get the eye in focus. Getting eyes tack sharp is key in taking pictures of people and animals, and I assume it also applies to fake animals

 

[Jessmica]

What is the project you want to use it for?

Issues I see with the composition:
1- Its dead centre of the frame. Read up on the rule of thirds
2- There is alot of empty space over its head. Ensure that you fill the frame with your subject
3- I don't like the angle its shot at. You are too low.
4- If possible, try and get the eye in focus. Getting eyes tack sharp is key in taking pictures of people and animals, and I assume it also applies to fake animals

Of course.. why didn't I see that before??
Thanks alot for the advise, I've used the rule of thirds technique and I made the eyes a little more striking
I know was too low, but the model was pretty much directly above me
My project is 'shape' so I can use just about anything This was just a particular image I was stuck on
I guess I'll try harder to get a good angle next time?