concert shot critique #2

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  1. adstudio3d

    adstudio3d TPF Noob!

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    This is another shot from the same show as my previous post.
    Maybe his body is partially cut off, but I like the flow of this photo, just the shapes created and the way the background guitarist is framed but does not stand out... Shot at 50mm 2.8 slow hand held spur of the moment shot.

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    i like the coloring, but you cut off the bass head, and the elbow again. the leg cut off is in a better position then the other image, its above the knees.
     
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    read your first thread.
     
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    Yea, I knew I was going to hear that one again haha!
    I'll keep that in mind for the future. I have absolutely no training or mentoring, basically shoot what I like. I should have signed up to this forum a while back it would have helped. But thanks again
     

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