Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by competition, Dec 16, 2004.
horridly dark, atleast imo.
The background is cluttered, the picture directly behind the subjects' head is distracting, I can't decide if that thing on the RH side is a radio or a humidifier, the table and poster(?) are angled as if there's a perspective shift, but the subject is square to the camera, I can't figure out what's in front of him, the wallpaper is twenty years past its prime, and the image is irrecoverably noisy.
I like it.
ditto - adjust levels in PS, the noise is great esp. with the vintage looking wallpaper and rough looking subject. Pretty good shot, though. i think the top of the head being cropped was a bad move, too. can you uncrop the top?
ishean, i cant uncrop the top because it is the real format that i made it /my english is tooo bad ...sorry/
here another one of the sma eperson...but i dont like it too much
are u scanning prints?
(That's a short bark of a laugh.)
If the top of the head can't be uncropped, how about cutting off more of it with a 2:3 ratio? I can't believe I'm saying this, but I'm worried that it will remove some of the clutter and weaken the shot.
1. no i made it with digital camera
2. yes i can crop it it ...but not now
Nice. Different style of portrait, never seen one quite like it. I find that refreshing.
i agree with walter but i'm not too keen on ALL the grain. maybe a bit less.
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