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  1. competition

    competition TPF Noob!

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    horridly dark, atleast imo.
     
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    The background is cluttered, the picture directly behind the subjects' head is distracting, I can't decide if that thing on the RH side is a radio or a humidifier, the table and poster(?) are angled as if there's a perspective shift, but the subject is square to the camera, I can't figure out what's in front of him, the wallpaper is twenty years past its prime, and the image is irrecoverably noisy.

    I like it.
     
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    ditto - adjust levels in PS, the noise is great esp. with the vintage looking wallpaper and rough looking subject. Pretty good shot, though. i think the top of the head being cropped was a bad move, too. can you uncrop the top?
     
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    competition TPF Noob!

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    10x all,
    ishean, i cant uncrop the top because it is the real format that i made it /my english is tooo bad ...sorry/

    10x again
     
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    competition TPF Noob!

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    here another one of the sma eperson...but i dont like it too much:)
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    are u scanning prints?
     
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    matthew robertson TPF Noob!

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    HA!

    (That's a short bark of a laugh.)

    If the top of the head can't be uncropped, how about cutting off more of it with a 2:3 ratio? I can't believe I'm saying this, but I'm worried that it will remove some of the clutter and weaken the shot.
     
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    competition TPF Noob!

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    1. no i made it with digital camera
    2. yes i can crop it it ...but not now :)

    10x
     
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    Nice. Different style of portrait, never seen one quite like it. I find that refreshing.
     
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    i agree with walter but i'm not too keen on ALL the grain. maybe a bit less.
     

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