construction work

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  1. mcb

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    taken at a construction site .. thought it was interesting.
    critique and any editing you would like to do is appreciated.

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    Do you know what i think would have made this a great shot? If you took that bottle away, filled it with something (water obviously easiest, but something dark in colour might look better), and replaced it exactly how it was, then took your shots as the water flowed out of the bottle. The image looks so calm and still, but something like that would have really told a much bigger storey (even if you did fabricate the storey). On the other hand, it may have completely ruined the shot :D. Good work.
     
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    i like the picture as it is the black and white gives it a gritty feel
     
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    oh yeah, don't get me wrong, I love it too.. my imagination just got carried away (maybe that's evidence that hte picture is good as it is)
     

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