Constructive Criticism Please!

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by jtimmons, Oct 13, 2006.

  1. jtimmons

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    Taken with an Panasonic LZ3 Point and Shoot.
     
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    I like the motive, but I think it would be better without the bee. Or having the bee a more central part of the picture and in focus. Behind the flower is a little overexposed it seems.

    Nice flower though
     
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    Very promising. If it had the bees front and not it's rear end it'd be awesome. Or even one without the bee, though I think the bee does a great job of putting the size of that flowers into perspective. All in all, I still think it's a cool photo and like it
     

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