Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by blinded, Mar 10, 2005.
the fuzz broke up my friends party so we had nothing to do
dude that is so good. awesome.
I like the journalistic field to it, It would of rocked if the guy would puff a little smoke, or make the cigar somoke more....the only thing I find a little bit off is that it needs more midtonesin the background, to really get the feel its inside a car, if you want to keep the journalistic feel and make it feel more real.
Nice tones, I like.
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