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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by momof3girls, Sep 8, 2008.

  1. momof3girls

    momof3girls TPF Noob!

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  2. cjkriebel

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    #2 is very cute i love it
     
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    1. Nice. Cute pose, but the flash is just a little harsh oh her lower face/chest. The eyes could use a little more work as well; ideally you want the catchlight in the iris not pupil, and there's still noticable redeye, esp her left eye.

    2. Much better expsoure, both this and #1 could use just a tweak of levels/curves to adjust the skin tones. Not fond of hte angle, but that's a personal taste thing.

    3. Good exposure, but a little too 'side-on'. Would prefer to see it from a little more to camera left.

    A great idea, and well executed. I think a little more work on your lighting and you'll really have something.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.

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    Absolutely adorable!
     
  5. momof3girls

    momof3girls TPF Noob!

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    Thank you for your comments!

    Thanks Tirediron, your C&C is very helpful!

    I "tried" to fix the catchlights...keep in mind I have no clue what I'm doing. Does this look better or too fake/weird looking?

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    awe - too cute!!! #2 made me laugh - very adorable....and I like #3...so, so cute!
     
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    I like #2
    I can't add much C&C since I'm still learning, but I think they are pretty cute shots.
     
  8. tirediron

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    The catchlights are fine, but the pupils have taken on a rather fake appearance.
     
  9. momof3girls

    momof3girls TPF Noob!

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    yeah that's what I thought...any tips on how to make them more realistic looking? I googled it but just kept getting stuff about how to enhance irises/color.
     

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