Couple on the beach

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  1. chrisfenison

    chrisfenison TPF Noob!

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    [​IMG]
    1/1250 sec, f/8.0
    Cropped, Sepia Filter applied in PS CS
     
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    I love the composition and feel of the shot. But it's oversharpened IMO.
     
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    Very nice!
     
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    Agreed.

    Here's a version with a little less vivid colors and a barley and sharpening at all. [​IMG]


    And here's a version with a little blur applied to give it a really soft look.
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    I like the softness of the last one. The first one must have been because of the sharpness. There was just something with it that I couldn't put my finger on. Good work.
     
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    I really, really, really, really like the composition of this picture. I like the softness, adds to the mood of the photo.
     
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    That second one should definately go to print.
     
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    chrisfenison TPF Noob!

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    Thanks folks. Seems like everyone likes the soft one the best. Maybe I'll do an oversize print of it just to see what it looks like.
     
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    I like the original one you posted best. I don't think it was oversharpened at all. It was nice and crispy, and the color was great. The other ones seem flat in comparison.
     
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    sharpening halos != sharp and crisp

    Look at the top of the hills there is a white halo which is an obvious sign of oversharpening.

    I do like the 2nd version you posted. Though I like the saturation on the first. It could use at least a little sharpening. Try a couple USM on low settings (like 40/2/1) a couple times.
     
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    Of the three, I like the first best. Composition is very nice for the pano crop. As for fixing the look of the photo, I would suggest to start with the original file, sharpen less and do fine adjustments with levels and curves to lend "pop" without blowing out the highlights.
     
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    I like the second one also, mainly because it's a romantic picture and romance to this old fool should be soft and dreamy, though i know the people into S&M would disagree :wink:
     

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