Crazy Horse building.

craig · Oct 4, 2005

This is a shot of the Crazy Horse visitor center. Taken near 8:00 pm. I like this one for the florescent lights in the building and the sky. I think I caught a moment in a generally lifeless building. I am not sure so let me know.

As always the colour is a little curious. Tell me how that looks as well.

1600 ISO 2.8 @ 1/10th focal length = 24mm.

jadin · Oct 4, 2005

I think you captured what you were going for nicely. Only suggestion I have is to dodge the sky, it's too dark atm.

eydryan · Oct 4, 2005

i like it naturally but i think the distortion is a bit bothering, the building is curved just a little bit and well i find it a bit discomforting. it may be solvable either by cropping or perspective adjustment in photoshop but that i don't know.

also i don;t like it that the shot ends to t he left if you see it with a little bit of not white

and i think that should be cropped out it has no reason to live

you could also try a crop from about the middle up, it looks interesting.

unfortunatelly, due to the high iso, editing is probably out of the question.

and i also think that if you take at least that bottom black out the shot will look more ballanced. or maybe just keep a bit.

anyway, i enjoy it and it looks to me more like storm, you know, like it's coming down on those unsuspecting inside...