Creative McDonalds

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  1. Chillquik

    Chillquik TPF Noob!

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    Creative McDonalds
    I took this photo last night as an experiment. It was a 25 second exposure, 16f aperture and I am quite pleased with the result. I think it's quite striking and creative.

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    Welcome to the forum. I like it, i love taking, abstract long exposures like these, nice shot.
     
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    Alex_B No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    long exposures without a tripod are certainly something which will stir up very opposing opinions ;) I like the colour, but i cannot really get the idea of the composition. it is certainly a good idea not to centre the McDump logo, but something seems odd to me. maybe experimenting with cropping would give some more interesting composition.

    I personally would have tried to kep it more steady on the logo, so it would be a little bit less blurred, but I know this can be hard to do handheld.

    certainly a creative idea! but i would experiment more :)
     
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    I was in the car at the time so it was very difficult to keep steady. I was just having fun experimenting, so I didn't have a tipod or anything
     
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    Thats what McDonalds does to your gut. Streaks it!
     
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    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I think you did well here and it looks good, but there is too much black sky in your frame. Crop in from above and then from the right, I should say, and see how you can give it yet more "punch". On the very right there is not so much that you will lose.

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