Creepy Apartment Building.

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  1. Chris FL

    Chris FL TPF Noob!

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    Took this picture an hour or so ago. Looks great as far as I'm concerned, but I'm an amature by far. :)

    Let me know what you think.
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  2. Chris FL

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    C'mon, its not THAT good, what could be better? :p
     
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    It's lopsided o_O that's the largest fault I see.

    Not much you can do with the yellow lights.

    There's a lot of dead space (black).

    Good angle (not directly in front is more visually appealing). Stupid sign on the right hand side sucks. But it's not like you can take that out. hehe ;)

    I take it this is digital? So maybe you could do it again? Or do you use photoshop? You can crop and rotate it there. Or have someone else try it.

    Very good try :) Keep going ok? Promise? Keep trying stuff :)
     
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    Yep, it's digital. Thanks for the suggestions, those are some great ideas.

    I do use photoshop, I tried rotating it a bit, but it's hard with it being on an angle. There aren't any parfectly horizontal lines for me to compare against. Would anyone care to try?
     

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