Crit on a few of my HDRs?

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  1. WhidWhacker

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    I would veryy much appreciate some constructive crit. from you guys, what could i improve on?!


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    I personally I like 3 & 4
     
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    The last one is my favorite. The horizon lines are tilted slightly on the first three which bothers me but only slightly. I like the first but wish the top of the church wasn't cut off!
     
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    I know what you mean, my tripod is terribly old and always slants no matter how i adjust it, giving almost all of my pictures a tilt. Thanks for the crit though
     
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    all nicely done... I like the lighting in #2 in particular.
     
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    yeah, I also love the last two.. especially the last one.
     
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    #1 is a very symmetrical building. You should have positioned yourself to compliment that aspect. Back up a bit and swivel camera to the right so the image is even on both sides. Chopping off the top of the building like that relegates this shot to the bin.
    #2 all your vertical lines are cockeyed. There must be a better angle than the one you submitted. #3 and #4 are pretty good except for the dark snow on the left side of the pics. There is no reason for the patch to be a shadow. Just doesnt look right.
     

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