Critical C&C please

Discussion in 'Landscape & Cityscape' started by jamescell, Oct 1, 2008.

  1. jamescell

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    This picture was taken somewhere in the up state NY, hand held during a working trip. I just now got to editing it. Please be critical.
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    I would have either tightened up the crop on the two people on the rock and given them more attention or removed them from the scene. Otherwise I like it.
     
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    I really like it... Great job. I seems that the trees are a little blurry and kinda pulls my attention to that but that might just be me. Other wise great shot and I don't really mind the blurriness its so nice and tells the whole story...:lol:
     
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    Nice landscape shot.... a tighter crop would have been great....nice capture once again.
     
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    I think its a great landscape but to someone who doesn`t know the subjects, they`re just distracting.

    My eye is drawn to the river entrance and from there my eye wanders down and finds the fallen tree. I think if you cropped it into a portrait mode and kept only the right half of the picture, you`d have a great one. If you wanted the people in it, I would prefer if they were sitting where the dead tree is.
     
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    Part of me says to go with a tighter crop & then part of me actually likes it just how it is. Overall, a good photo, imo. I really like how the sun seems to be shining so perfectly on the people. Great catch.
     

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