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  1. Foques

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    Okay, here is my first try on this board..
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    3 and 4 pictures were made about 2 years ago with a soap box..

    thanks in advance.
     
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    Hi Foques! Welcome to the forum. I like a lot of what you have here. 4,6 and 7 being my favorites. It looks like you've got an eye for composition, but I'd read up a little on the rule of thirds.

    Good stuff man.
     
  3. Foques

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    thank you very much for your input.

    How would I apply the rule of the thirds better in the above pictures?
    What should I have done differently?
     
  4. Foques

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    My second half explained me exactly what the rule of thirds is... kind of makes sense. I don't like it, at all, but for the sake of taking shots the right way, i'll give it a shot this weekend.

    Here is a few more i have.
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  5. Foques

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    Does that follow the rule of thirds?

    thanks in advance..


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    A lot of them seem kinda snap-shotish to me, but I do like 5,7, and 8. They would be better if they weren't all centered though.

    Welcome to the forum!
     
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    thank you.
    Most of them are snapshots... Thats why i am here and asking for the info on how to improve :)
     
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    I quite like photographs 5 and 6 of the original post. 5 I like because it's an interesting angle and subject. 6 I like because I'm a big sucker for Depth of Field shots and the composition is great imho. :)
     

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