Critique Away I'm New and I can take it.

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by AreEyeSeeRIC, Aug 3, 2004.

  1. AreEyeSeeRIC

    AreEyeSeeRIC TPF Noob!

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  2. JonMikal

    JonMikal TPF Noob!

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    I like the angle of the 3rd pic.
     
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    aaackk, i'm in overload, too many pics at once.

    i really like the blue one. is there a lot of post-processing in that one? i would have never thought to process a shot like that. a tad overexposed on the highlights, a little soft-focused, and BLUE! :D it all works. it's a very environmental feel
     
  4. hobbes28

    hobbes28 Incredible Supporting Member

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    I think that they are all good shots. I have to agree with the angle comment. There are some interesting angles. I have to say that it looks like you are more comfortable with B&W shots. Good work and welcome to the forum. :)
     
  5. mentos_007

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    So .. you wanted a critique... let's start:
    Pic. 1:
    Very nice contrast and interesting composition, however I'd like to see the whole calculator on the right. But ok
    P 2
    Falling on the left side? but nice reflection in the water
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    I really enjoy it, but if you can go back there... try to take the texture of things in the bottom in focus. we will see the effect
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    Great drops!
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    I like it very much. I like the croping and contrast. It is the picture *with soul*
    6 and 7. ok for me. I won't comment the the topic because I have nothing in common with Americans so I don't care.
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    Great reflection but for me too much blue color. maybe improving in ps?
    9. and 10 I like them. Great idea.
     
  6. AIRIC

    AIRIC TPF Noob!

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    Ric,

    Very interesting pics. Some are very strong. The gutter, car door and blue are my fav. Great work.
     
  7. Tuna

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    I agree about too many pictures...but here goes,
    (1) A little too busy - I would prefer a subject to center the focus.
    (2)dark (intended?) and tilted (intended?)
    (3)(4)(5)(6)(7) I like these for verying reasons. Most have interesting prespectives and composition. All the b&w's may need a little extra contrast for punch.
    (8) A little too blue...and I would have liked to have seen more of what is reflected as well as the reflection.
    (9) not sure what to think of this...
    (10) I like the details of this shot. Again, I would suggest adding contrast.
     
  8. Alison

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    Hmm, a little too many to really critique well. I like the last one the best, nice composition but the contrast needs a boost to make it pop.
     

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