Critique first pick

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  1. Amphoteric

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    I am far from an expert but the one thing I notice is the open area in the top left corner. It draws the attention from the photo. So I would definately crop that. I would also make it a bit brighter. Not much though.

    I really like the photo though. The idea is great. But I like things like that:)
     
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    I agree that it could do with being a touch brighter. I think the only other thing is that although the rail acts as a 'leading line' into the scene, it doesn't really lead anywhere, and sort of chops the photo in half. Having said that I do quite like it, so that goes to show that photography rules are made to be broken!

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