Critique for 1 picture

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by olympus999, Jul 28, 2010.

  1. olympus999

    olympus999 TPF Noob!

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    I think this image is interesting, but i did not get a single favorite on deviantart, so there is probably something wrong that i do not notice :D
    It was taken with ordinary digital camera. I actually ordered myself nikon D5000 few days ago, soon i should get it :)
    Ou, and this ise the firs image i modified using adobe lightroom. One thing that i do notice, is that there is shadow on the flower, it would be better if there were no shadow.

    Bad English, sorry.
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    arios23 TPF Noob!

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    the bad thing about this picture is that I did not shoot it
     
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    lol

    I really like the picture, shadow and all
     
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    olympus999 TPF Noob!

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    I agree with that shadow on the smaller flower adds something, but shadow on the bigger flower right side is something there could not be.
    Thank you both for nice feedback :)
     
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    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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    The vignette is draconian. A crop would have been more effective.

    The background color is not complimentary.

    The DOF was correct for the main subject, the flower! :thumbup:
     

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