Critique invited and expected :) another MTV style image

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  1. lollypop

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    Again i like this image it was designed to be used as the background for a buisness card (college set task) image, please critique i am absorbing information like a sponge :)

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    i like this much better than any of your other posts.

    what kind of business card would determine more than anything if this is a successful image or not.

    next time don't overexpose it, the goal in most cases should be to have continuous tones throughout the image.

    in this image i would say lots of complete blacks would be okay, but not all the whites.
     
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    Thank you, the image is ment to be for an identity card the white area is where the writting will go for example top right my name, bottom right my course info.

    I used a nikon d70 i wanted to exaggerate the natural lines in my lips
     
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    hmmmm then it might be okay, i couldn't be sure til i saw it.
     
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    hmm looks somewhat gothicy to me... meh
     

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