critique please

[Karalee]

Oh man, you guys are terrible. Is it Confuse the Newbie week? Wheres the memo?

If you would of filled out your TPS reports you would of gotten the memo.

I must be low on the totem pole, I dont get those

 

[Walt]

i think the color version would be better.

I have to disagree, the B&W version has much more drama to it.