Critique please.

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  1. shawnxstl

    shawnxstl TPF Noob!

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    You know the drill. Give me hell if needed.

    Canon Rebel XTi - kit lens. =/

    Which one of the ropes should I keep?

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    First rope picture definitely has the best composition.

    Good work overall.
     
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    prodigy2k7 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    IMHO, get rid of the watermark graphic, big distraction to me...

    I like the one with the flower...its like everything is dull and then boom there is some light... like everything is evil but a heavenly or godly being is there... the flower...haha

    edit: the flower needs to be in more focus...

    and i do agree with first poseter about 1st pic.... good comp
     
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    Josh66 Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I like the last one the best.

    I agree about the watermark though, it's distracting - reduce the opacity or subdue it or something...
     
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    +1, word for word.
     
  6. shawnxstl

    shawnxstl TPF Noob!

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    thats about as sharp as i could get the flower. Idk why but this lens is reallllly bad with things being in focus close up. Unless I'm doing something wrong? anyone have ideas?

    I'll reduce the opacity on the wm.

    And thanks for the tips.
     

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