Critique Please

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by ckphotography, Mar 17, 2010.

  1. ckphotography

    ckphotography TPF Noob!

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    Posted this in Beyond the Basics but it was recommended that I post here as well. I have just started to dive into high key photography. Having worked with mostly natural light this is a new adventure for me. I have a small space to work with (only about 14 feet long and 11 feet wide).

    I have two strobes on umbrellas set up aimed at the backdrop. I have a speedlight with umbrella set up as a fill light on the subject placed to my right (subjects left) with a white reflector to the right of the subject to bounce back light.

    Popped the white with curves and added a small amount of contrast. Viola! Ha- seriously- constructively critique. I don't quite like them.

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    i love how you pictured a child)))

    so sincere and clean? great job!!!
     
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    The first shot of the child looks like a childs ad for gerber or something... or an apple juice commercial! haha
     
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    Oh my gosh these are so cute, the kid looks so much like one of my customer's kids!
     
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    These are nice comps, but none of them are high-key.
     

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