Critique please

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  1. Leigh Wanstead

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    My humble opinion...yes, to dark
    can't really tell what you wanted to show
     
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    I dont think there is much to this photo. There doesn't seem to be a unique subject. Just because its a reflection does not make it interesting. I would suggest in the future if your shooting a reflection show the whole object that is reflecting. This will make the picture more interesting even if the reflected image is not interesting in and of itsellf
     
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    Thanks for the suggestion.:D

    What do you think this one?

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    Here is the full size image url.

    http://www.smootharm.com/picture/nfpicturepro/albums/userpics/10002/IMGA9547.jpg

    Regards
    Leigh
     
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    ok, I am not good at this type of art, but when I saw this I was thinking.
    Those chairs look like they are waiting for someone to get out of the cars and come sit on them...I know, chairs don't think!!!
    I like this one much better than the other
    Just my opinion
     
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    Well... i hope you got no issues but i went ahead and did a quick adjustment with levels to the 1st, and i think this way you get what you saw with your eyes.... :D it happens that sometimes we get so anxious with the image we saw, that we rush into it forgetting the camera sees things a little different than we do....

    So hope you don't mind..and here's the updated image....

    Marc

    ummmm...how do i post an image again? :D
     
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    The first is way too dark. Yes.
    The second is much better, but I feel you'd have done yourself and the photo a favour if you had taken the third chair and placed it in row with the other two.
     
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    Hahahahaha...i did it....had to upload to my site though....but its ok....so here's what i did...i did fix any of the extras i could have....but i thought this is what you saw....i also cropped a little from the bottom, the brown shape became apparent after fixing the levels.
     
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    Not digging it or the redos. Way too dark, and no point of interest. I like the way you are going here though.
     
  10. Leigh Wanstead

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    Thanks

    I should plan it before I clicked the button. Next time I will try your method:D.

    Regards
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    i think if it were brighter and showed the window frame so it was more noticeable as a reflection, it would look much better.
     

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